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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
You Are....... You are my sunshine That shines my eyes away To the wind that blows my mind away You are the light That brings morning You are the night you make my night so beautiful You are my everything Everything that counts You are.... You are one to shine my eyes away You are my heart and soul That takes my breathe away You are the reason I found You are my love That makes my heart away You are my sunshine You are... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ And YOU are a beautiful holder of lovely thoughts~ Thank you for always sharing the softer side of your heart and thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahhh, dear Vandana, did you read this loud to the one you wrote it for? It is beautiful and will bring happiness. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful Vandana... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What I enjoy about your poetry is that your heart is always in the right place....always so full of love. Nice vandana~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Vandana it is so refreshing and pure, enjoyed very much the reading....Your words sing ... yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...one of your best...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes I think it is one of your best to Vandana, so much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, dear one.... You've written for some time now, but this is as close to a perfection of poetry I've ever seen from you. Your growth has been simple but amazing... you continue to write in a language not of your own; but you have delved beautifully and deeply. I am so very proud of you!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana, The softness in your heart shows in your writings, well done with caring.... BC |
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