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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. No heads turn No one Is writing poems And sending them With a single flower The young pass by On the way To a another day Full of plans and dreams While October struggles With being alone As the leaves fall down . |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
oh heart stops while reading your words it craves for you know what. a great writing |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Huan Yi. Wonderful observation. However some of us still send poems with flowers. I won over my wife with my writings. Every aniversary she gets flowers and a poem. Nice work. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A beutiful, soulful poem, John. Ida |
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echolong Junior Member
since 2008-09-17
Posts 22 |
 Old Echo |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
very emotoinal and soulful...i like it. |
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