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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-09-24 08:42 AM


my God
it's Seven-thirty already
eyes open
like french doors rusted
and ready to bust clean off
their german hinges

my God
the last place I want to go
is a mathematics class
I doubt I'll even make the drive
without falling back asleep

my God
I hope the X-ray comes back
a perfect weld
with no ferocity
and the weld itself
refuses to break in tests

then I'd be able
to stop going to school
so terribly early

And take online courses.

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GothicCherry
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1 posted 2008-09-24 01:54 PM


haha!!! that's a good one.
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2008-09-24 06:12 PM


Thanks. The weld test I took at work (which will get me an eight dollar raise.... GO TEAM.) should be processed by next week.

Everyone had better be crossing their fingers! I'm sure I'll pass.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-09-25 01:08 AM


Fingers crossed.
            Ida

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
4 posted 2008-09-25 09:07 AM




Thanks, Ida!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

GothicCherry
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5 posted 2008-09-25 11:15 AM


FingersDoubleCrossed!!! Mwahahahahah
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-09-25 12:13 PM


... haha if only I could still go to a math class, would love that!

This was well written and I wish you good luck!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
7 posted 2008-09-25 01:29 PM


Thanks guys, I have to go to work today, and we'll see if they've finished it up yet, we can't know for sure just yet!

They x ray it, twist, pull it, bend it in all directions.

Let's hope the metal is more brittle than my fabulous weld!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
8 posted 2008-09-27 07:44 PM


I passed, just so everyone knows.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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