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Subconscious Shivers |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Queer thoughts are always haunting my dreams Hopefully that will cease as you lay beside me To leave now would be tempting fate And to let you go is taking the bait. The fire you’ve lit for my soul Is warming my body as a whole Conscience of the feeling you bring My heart is about to break out and scream Yet in my subconscious I feel so afraid Of getting hurt when your love turns and fades. Loud and absurd is the ringing in my ears When to my closest friends, paper and pen I reveal my only and very lonely fears. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Your words of verse flowed among the whispers, I enjoyed it. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
When to my closest friends, paper and pen I reveal my only and very lonely fears. I liked this. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Marry me! Do it! Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Michaela, I loved your verse, it's intense and has a beautiful flow. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Thanks you guys. I wrote this during in-school so i wuz kind of worried it wouldn't show the right emotions in it. |
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