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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-09-23 08:12 PM


Time,space and memories
combine as musical notes
that toll like a bell in my mind.
Evoking impressions
and dream-like images,
Shimmering and shifting.
They pass through the consciousness
and then move on.
If only I could grasp something firmly
and hold on to it.

                      Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (09-24-2008 01:17 AM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-24 08:35 AM


It seems an impossible thing to do, dear Ida. We are in the flow, movement is constant and there is this feeling of moving away or into something, but we can't move from the moment of now. It is fascinating and mysterious.

I love your ponderings, they are the kind of thoughts that intrigue me too.

Consciousness is the key always I guess.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2008-09-25 01:20 AM



Dear Ida, that just doen't sound like you,
because you always seem so positive but perhaps I'm reading it wrong. Love to you dear lady.

Lindsay

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2008-09-25 04:24 AM


Hi, Ida!  Don't you just hate it when that happens?     Seriously though I do understand and think you've expressed "it" so very well!

Helen

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-09-25 07:47 AM


Yo Ida,

Everyone has those days everyonce in a while.

Love Bobby

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2008-09-25 02:23 PM


IdaDear~
When a thought comes our way ... it often flirts with us, knowing it is going to kiss us softly before heading for someone else's inking well~

*sigh* ... another one will come and stay~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
6 posted 2008-09-25 02:31 PM


You cannot even hold onto "you"

::smiles::

(((Ida)))

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2008-09-25 04:19 PM


True, Uriah, Very true.
                 Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2008-09-25 04:20 PM


Hi Marge, Hope you are feeling better, I am always thinking of you and love to hear your thoughts on my humble offerings.
                          Love,
                              Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2008-09-25 04:22 PM


Hi Bobby I don't think of it as a bad day just some deep thought.
                               Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
10 posted 2008-09-25 04:33 PM


Dear Lindsay, With your wonderful, sunny attitude this must seem rather morbid to you but it really isn't. My mind just looks into all kinds of corners.
                                 Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
11 posted 2008-09-25 07:51 PM


Margharita and Honeybunch, two of the wisest
of women. I am always thilled by comments from either one of you.
                             Ida

threadbear
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since 2008-07-10
Posts 817
Indy
12 posted 2008-09-26 12:03 PM


Brilliantly iconic, Ida!
I have frequently mused how different life would be if we could actually visualize and conceptualize our thoughts.  Maybe the next few years will allow our thoughts to be displayed somehow on a video screen.  Ideas just don't seem real until they have flesh.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
13 posted 2008-09-26 05:04 AM


Hello Ida, this is very beautiful, this is very deep indeed, I definitly love this poem....

yann

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