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dah1namedj0na
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since 2007-08-19
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0 posted 2008-09-22 11:03 PM



Within your arms,
Is my true home.
At anywhere else
Alone I roam.

As the midnight sky
Has the moon,
You’re my sun to rise,
Bringing brightness soon.

And when I hold you in my arms
And close my eyes,
I wouldn’t even care if the
whole world just pass me by.

When I’m embracing you close,
Hugging you tight,
Everything feels possible
Like a sun filled night.

One plus one may equal two.
But for infinity add me and you.


© Copyright 2008 John H. Nguyen - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2008-09-23 11:21 AM


I love that last couplet.  Excellent.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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