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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2008-09-22 02:56 PM



LAST LEAF STANDING

Summer days dwindle
Frost gathers on limbs,
The trees green leaves start to fade

The color wheel spins
And the bright autumn dawn
Turns what the forest has made,

Chill breezes blow,
Changing green to gold,
Crimson, scarlet and red,

Leaves abandon the branch
Drifting down to the ground.
A blanket for its earthly bed,

Slowly but surely
They give up the fight,
Until all of the limbs are bare

And the wind does its job,
As the trees shed their clothes
Till there is just one leaf standing there.


Wm. Tracey Bakelar
2008


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1 posted 2008-09-22 04:08 PM


William,

It's been a long, slow summer in some parts of the world, all now in ready and readying for the even longer sleep of winter...

and you brought that home.


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2 posted 2008-09-22 05:21 PM


Thank you for sharing the beauty of your fall with us.

Alison

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3 posted 2008-09-22 09:17 PM



Acolades for this one Tracy, a delightful poem. Well done.

Lindsay

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4 posted 2008-09-26 05:48 PM


Autumn comes but once a year, and,
Though the Seasons change, The spring of our lives will go on forever

Thank you for your kind words.
Tracey

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