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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-09-22 06:26 AM



some sunday morning afternoons
we wear the same air around us
as if it were a tent with hands
that touched our faces together
and made a smile place accidental

our hands touch finger ends
like reaching under the table toes
flirting when others are busy
with church place thoughts
and not planning sinful seductions

and then our eyes are there
double parked on the freeway
in the fast lane reclining
into nearly closed day dreams
knowing each other is knowing

with help wanted sighs showing
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2008-09-22 09:22 AM


The stones are showing lovely sides this morning.


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with you
2 posted 2008-09-22 09:23 AM


"into nearly closed day dreams
knowing each other is knowing"

I love this


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-09-22 09:29 AM


Ms sun, thank you babe for the drive by


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Ms suesean thank you hon for looking in the windows.

Indigo
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4 posted 2008-09-23 01:08 AM


our worship whispers
bring pier-side religion to
the Via Real.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-09-23 05:35 AM


ms indi....I was expecting you ...was hoping you remembered the directions,thanks ms
Margherita
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6 posted 2008-09-23 05:06 PM


Your seduction plans sound great, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-09-23 05:37 PM


thank you ms mar...you bless me
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8 posted 2008-09-24 05:57 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2008-09-25 10:24 AM


I'd even put up with a freeway for an afternoon of your Sunday morning.

A

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-09-25 10:30 AM


Ms van, thanks lady.
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Ms ali-san thank you for the drive by babe.

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