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Open Poetry #43

Feel The Wind

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2008-09-22 12:19 PM

I wrote this one last week on a small break i took, in fact the words suddenly appeared and i took a break before they were gone.

Feel the Wind

Distance separates us
and a long time has passed
since I last saw you
and I'm sure you feel the same

but as I told you before leaving
whenever you want to feel my presence
feel the wind

the wind will embrace you
as I used to do
the wind will whisper sweet words to you
as I used to do

and trust me when I tell you
that the wind is my messenger
he will send you my feelings
and my words

distance separates us
but whenever you want to feel my presence
feel the wind
because when I feel the wind
I feel you.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2008-09-22 12:22 PM

"the wind will whisper sweet words to you
as I used to do"

very wistful
lovely poem

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2008-09-22 05:37 PM

WOW, DreamerSpirit, This is like a response to my "WHISPERS" It makes me think she is answering back.

Cool Poem Thanks.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-09-22 07:20 PM

I loved especially the thought of the wind carrying feelings...an embrace and a whisper...emotions on the fly.
Beautiful write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-09-23 02:36 PM

... el viento susurra palabras de amor ...

Oh, this is tender and beautiful. A thought that caresses the soul.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-09-24 03:08 PM

Beautiful!!! I am delighted you took a break to share this.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2008-09-24 05:56 PM

enjoyed

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2008-09-25 12:38 PM

feels much like this should be sung...enjoyed, thanks for sharing

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