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SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada

0 posted 2008-09-21 09:45 AM



the wind on the water
and I'm not talking waves.
I paid for chemtrails
in the shape of "Elvis Lives"
but got a mere sonnet.
they're beautiful tonight, though,
against the struggling sun
as the sea monster
in the west pulls her under.
a real modern version of
Romeo and Juliette
written in cumulus.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-21 04:29 PM


Clever write! I had never heard of those chemtrails and went now google-searching ... wow there is some real serious stuff to study here!! I am impressed, by your poem, by what it implies and by what I just discovered.

Love,
Margherita        

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

SkaaDee
Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada
2 posted 2008-09-21 10:36 PM


hi Margherita

I hesitate posting contoversial stuff
but if things are on my mind they tend to come out in my writing.
It's for the inquistive, like yourself, to weigh it.
I have no agenda.

Thanks for reading.

Scotty  

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