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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2008-09-21 07:45 AM



I dont play music anymore,
it makes incisions on my heart,
it being ours.
Cold wind murmurs, haunts my empty soul,
deathly silent.
Moving within shadows,to
avoid people i
neither care for or need.
So short a time since us,
yet it feels an eternity.
A limbo world of
transient dark shadows.
Only you do i love or ever will.
only you shine the diffused
light to allow me to live,
and come alive.
To step from my
surreal nothingness,
inflicted by nobodys, empty
shell like people,
devoid of substance.
With you life is vital, essential,
let us live an essential life again.
Love is forever,
forever i shall love you.
Shine your light to
end my dark days.
Be alive with our love again,
come into my open arms.

This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-09-21 08:20 AM


It's good to see you back, dear Phil, though it saddens me that your heart experiences still such deep loneliness.

Beautifully expressed longing for love.

May you be open to the opportunities of now.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-09-21 09:17 AM


This heart felt your ache and longing, and whispers gentle thoughts, Phil.
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-09-21 01:47 PM


Glad to see you back, Phil. This is so sad but beautiful still.
                             Ida

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4 posted 2008-09-22 02:01 AM


I am always happy that I spend time reading your poems.  This is lovely.  I am glad that you are here again and hope you don't go away for so long next time.

A

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