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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2008-09-21 01:06 AM



A Visit with You


What warm amber flickers within your heart this evening?
Mere thought for only a moment of a day?
Or
reflection of the depths of the deepest of seas?

What profound sentence would you prescribe for tomorrow?
One that sets the world on fire
desiring adamantly with a hunger to taste every word?
Or
Will your shyness hinder your thoughts into concealed study?

Are you that morning dove cooing and praising the rising sun,
blessing a new day of life and living?
Or
are you an eagle soaring high above the snowy mountaintops,
surveying God's gift to you?

Whatever your contemplation,
wherever you may go in your heart and mind
allow me a visit there too.

Sing your song for that day.

Write your lyrics and poetry,
and invite me in
to marvel at your thoughts
and to have a visit with you.

It would be for me
a day of sunshine and affection.

A cherished day,
a visit with you



[This message has been edited by JL (09-21-2008 11:41 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-21 06:51 AM


JL, this is truly captivating as it points in the direction of an inspired existence and the sharing of this capacity of contemplating the beauty that we are and that surrounds and fills us.

Just wonderful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2008-09-21 09:33 AM


So often, you bring to us the sunrise.
Wonderful write, nice to read you JL!

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