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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-09-18 08:51 PM


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Tonight perhaps
For the last time—

Naked knees
And bare arms


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-18 09:01 PM


John,

This is a good one.  Yep, you could be right.

Bobby

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-09-18 09:31 PM


I'm not ready for it.
echolong
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since 2008-09-17
Posts 22

3 posted 2008-09-19 01:34 PM


let the dream continue but release the BIG fish.

echo

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-09-19 04:42 PM


I must admit that I read everything you write...just love it when I find one that I truly get.  Just not wise enough to find words always, but even I get the sweater message...keep writing, please. I'll keep trying...love your work
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