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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-09-18 07:48 PM




        


Deep dark burgandy red,
leaves floating about my head,
wind swirling, dancing around,
each leaf of beauty falls to the ground,


Come with me, my lover of my soul,
run through the leaves as they blow,
clasp my hand into yours a perfect mold,
your kisses warm me from the bitter cold


Leaves are falling in slow romantic motion,
yellow, orange, red brown,colors for every emotion,
little pieces of love falling upon my sleeve,
sharing, laughing, loving, on a warm autumns eve.

  
© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-18 08:16 PM


Yo A Romantic Heart,

This is a lovely poem with a lovely picture.

The leaves are starting to fall here in Philadelphia too.

Love Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2008-09-18 09:45 PM




"Leaves are falling in slow romantic motion,
yellow, orange, red brown,colors for every emotion...

sharing, laughing, loving, on a warm autumns eve."

pleasant romanticism; poetic and photo.
imagery!


RC Langill
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since 2008-03-09
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3 posted 2008-09-18 10:28 PM


A wonderful warmth pervades your verse and image: soft reds and rich browns.

quote:

little pieces of love falling upon my sleeve,


As nature gives, let us freely receive.

WTBAKELAR
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4 posted 2008-09-19 09:58 AM


I am ready for Autumn,  slow walks thru the trees, Sweet evening breezes. We all need this.  Wonderful write.   Thank you.
Snowflake From Hell
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5 posted 2008-09-19 03:22 PM


cant say it any better than that

violence may not be the answer, but it does make good headway

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