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Open Poetry #43
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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
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0 posted 2008-09-18 09:50 AM

A cold linoleum dance
across the kitchen floor
Belly swollen under her gown
undulating waves of life

Telling stories to a beloved stranger
of fairies and queens and the bakers man
Voice is soothing and calm
undulating waves of life
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-09-18 07:41 PM

"undulating waves of life" That is a nice description of pregnancy!
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-09-21 03:06 PM

This is lovely, Tina.
                Ida
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-09-21 04:51 PM

Tenderly beautiful ...

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)
The Lady
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4 posted 2008-09-22 12:15 PM



"a beloved stranger"

so well done Tina
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