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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-18 06:17 AM

just another midweek monday in mosey
with the ocean cough drizzle spit sky
and residue of puppies licking dreams
coating the gray sidewalks with shimmer

herding the copperhead down back sides
where the black witch used to run her tin
and turn the heads of the stripper skins
as they pretended to wipe their eyes

onto no men avenue and the huts of tinkle
where the zero bama crews parade their benz
and bend their proper bottoms again
to find some other fight with no punches

wagging their botox lippery like tails
and leaving little stacks of lies
on every corner by the hydrants
then tugging at their leashes to run

to avenue fortresses with paper ceilings

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daark

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-09-18 09:43 AM

Your descriptions interest me. Sometimes reading them is like decoding a message. Know what I mean? But, I have my secret decoder ring on - so I enjoyed this one a lot.

A

gadfly4you
Junior Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 37

2 posted 2008-10-23 11:32 AM

I like this, well done! Great way to show a point of view :-)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-10-23 11:39 AM

Ali-san. Thanks babe

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Gad' thanks so much.

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

4 posted 2008-10-23 05:10 PM

working your magic
there on blue pages I sigh
whispered bliss unfurled.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-10-23 05:17 PM

ms indi...you do make me smile thanks babe

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2008-10-23 06:30 PM

"wagging their botox lippery like tails
and leaving little stacks of lies
on every corner by the hydrants"
EXACTLY! Perfect imagery, DS.
Brilliant write.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-10-23 06:39 PM

Enjoyed!!!

ARCTIC WIND

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2008-10-23 08:05 PM

well apparently my decoder ring isn't working....you should come fix it for me D

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-10-24 07:02 AM

midnite...thanks...grin

________________

aw, thanks so much
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ms suesea...has to do with the zerobama and mccain pooping contests...as for your ring...send me your address, I will grab my tools and come right over.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-10-26 08:13 AM

do you by chance make house calls to down under Mr Daark?? I think my decoder isn't working either!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-10-26 08:22 AM

Ms r/b. It might take a few hours, to row that far, but will see what I can do thanks.

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