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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Only now After all these years Do I admit to myself How stupid you were . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thats funny i love it |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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It is funny. But if I put me into it, it's sad. Watch: "Only now After all these years Do I admit to myself How stupid you were" and I thought-- "Only now After all these years Do I admit to myself How stupid you were for loving me because I loved you." Not saying that's better or anything, it's just me adding my own sad ellipses... I would have to title it differently of course. I'd call it Recipricol Naivete'. But that's if it were mine. It ain't. As it is (as yours) it is damned good.  |
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