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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
My pen is bleeding on the paper, As love is bleeding in my heart. Each word's the bare truth - Put these words to music, Play this music on the strings of my soul, If you don't tear them, I'm yours. If you see me dying, Will you hold my hand through this hell? Will you save me like you did once? You know where to find the way To the temple of my hope. And I don't know... If only I had died tomorrow, Would you've turned back time, So that tomorrow'd never come? And if I asked you To kill me with your bare hands, Just not with your indifference... would you? I can't breathe the air of fear. I'm suffocating... will you hold me in your arms To chase the fear away? Will you breathe life into me? Will you forgive me the weakness of one day If I'm your shield for all the lifetime? If I could live an hour of your life, Dwell in your inner world that's just your own, I'd turn to real your most precious dreams. And if you realize I love you with each ounce of my heart, Will you ever say goodbye? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo A Beautiful Disaster, You write very well, and I like your work. I would make an effort to avoid starting sentences with "And". Bobby |
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