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Open Poetry #43

freedom stalker

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2008-09-16 02:53 PM

freedom stalker with malicious words
selling falsehoods like fresh zucchini
settling for less in speaking more
as eyelids blink eternal lapses
and close with heavy burdens laden

hearts bespeak their mournful joy
of sad refrains in purse-ed words
like whippoorwills in woeful songs
leading choruses of cool causation
as doubts migrate to certainty

freedom stalker, let things be
and settle peace without your scene

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-16 04:20 PM

Welcome back, dear Steaven! You have been missed.

This is a refined social/political poem and you give the idea that you have pondered this well.

I appreciate your work.

Love,
Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2008-09-16 05:19 PM

This:

"settling for less in speaking more"

I really liked.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-09-22 08:23 PM

I am liking this, steaven.

A

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