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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It was unexpected the words you said to me your longing your desire I never knew you eevn thought of me with want with need And now you've started my heart on a treacherous journey fraught with pain fraught with fear Because you arent free to give what you offer your love your life Someones gonna get hurt someones gonna lie over you over me |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Paula Finn, This is a cute one. I like your format. Bobby |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Very interesting poem. I see what you are saying and have just one bit of advice to share from one that has been there. If one cheats on the one they are with to be with you, you can not be surprized when the same happens to you with someone else. Be careful with your heart. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yep.. someone is going to get hurt. Don't underestimate the power of that hurt, it can bring you to you knees. I love the poem. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey Bobby thanks  WT...yes I know that very well Susan ty |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The format brings the poem out vividly. Well done. |
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