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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
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Massachusetts

0 posted 2008-09-15 12:59 PM



The chill trickles down,
Not sure if it’s her tears
or the rain falling from the clouds.
She has no reason to feel pride,
Not when there is so much to hide.
Her footsteps crunch softly on the gravel,
The sound shatters her peace of mind.
Not running away,
She honestly has so much to say.
Her wants and needs seem worthless,
Her voice gives way to countless dreams,
Never to be achieved.
Harsh reality doesn’t shock her anymore,
Another sleepless night,
Another slammed door.
Everything to everyone,
But to herself,
She is absolutely no one.
Her make up stays in place,
Can’t see through the mask
That is her smiling face.
A glint of what is hidden beneath,
Visible to only those that care enough to dig that deep,
A select few that realize the truth.
She’s playing a starring role,
An actress in her life,
Waiting for the final credits to roll,
So she can quietly slip away,
Give up the story line.
She’s no happily ever after,
Just a broken line in the end of one chapter
Of everyone else’s book.

© Copyright 2008 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28
Posts 237
UK
1 posted 2008-09-15 01:18 PM


We are all bit part players in our own life stories but some manage to achieve leading role status - and some become stars.
What is the difference? Often in it is merely a matter of self belief.
You have presented an interesting poem here but the ending is not always pre-destined; give it a try, you may even find a happy ending is just waiting to be disvcovered

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-09-16 01:41 AM


A sad poem but presented with harsh reality and beautiful images well blended.  I understand completely the mood of the subject of the poem, but also concur with David's response.

- Owl

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2008-09-16 11:27 AM


things change.  and then they change again.

  you just never know when.

I really liked this poem.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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