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Open Poetry #43

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TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

0 posted 2008-09-14 06:05 AM

I gave my heart, you gave it back.
We came undone, an untied knot.
Though love was pure, you turned it black.
I loved you once, but you forgot.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

Sara Mikael
Junior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 34

1 posted 2008-09-14 09:51 AM

what a great poem....

THE PAIN OF LOVE

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-09-14 04:20 PM

Short and to the point. Excellent writing.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-09-14 11:18 PM

Well written, but sad, David.

- Owl

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-09-15 12:01 PM

Yo TheAnonDavid,

Awww, very sad. Hey, that's the way it goes sometimes.

Nice work.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-09-15 05:19 AM

In just a few words you state a drama.

Intense.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

6 posted 2008-09-15 01:25 PM

Been There done that, Twice.

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

7 posted 2008-09-16 05:54 AM

sir ... theAnonDavivd....

When you write my pen stands for moments
To see this creativity boundless embraced the clouds of sky

Accept my simple pass

my respect
Nourzihane

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2008-09-16 11:07 AM

it's seems like they always forget.

and some days it seems like they never knew.

nicely done.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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