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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2008-09-14 04:38 AM




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empty paths of night

wishers at the well of souls

seamless sleepless dreams


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2008-09-14 12:33 PM


Fabulous!!  
Sometimes our dreams are like a deserted highway...
it's all in front of us with no where to go.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-09-14 04:18 PM


"wisher at the well of souls"
Lovely words from your magick penn, Mr. Ice.
                                  Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-09-15 05:46 AM


Profoundly beautiful, dear Charly!

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2008-09-15 05:30 PM


Hi Charly - "wishers at the well of souls" - Yeah, but I think the souls are drowning.  They don't like where they are, i.e. earth but then again it's those dreams that tell us things, right?

Helen

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