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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-09-13 07:58 AM



Days gone by

Days to come

Tears to cry

Missing my daughter and son


Little things

No longer share

Sorrow brings

Another tear


Wish and pray

It wont be long

Comes the day

Where you belong

Here to stay


My daughter...my son.

  
  
        
    


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-13 08:02 AM


Dear Victor, this hurts deeply. You succeeded well in conveying your emotion, your sensitivity, your love, the pain of separation. May you make the best of what is!
So poignant!
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-09-13 08:27 AM


I feel your pain, Victor.  I wish I didn't know how much it hurts, but I do, with regard to my daughter.

- Owl

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