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Open Poetry #43

Before all is Mended

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2008-09-11 07:34 PM

Before all is Mended

I ache when the wind blows by
Like whispers into my ears
I Wait for the rain to come
Thats when I let go and cry

Until that day of release

I will let all my wounds bleed
Because you cannot see them

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2008-09-13 10:39 PM

This is sadly beautiful, Juju.
The well of our emotions does indeed, run deeply!!

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

2 posted 2008-09-14 07:59 AM

How often do we hide our deepest emotions away from the people who should need to share them?
Lovely poem - an economy of words but a maximum of impact.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

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