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Open Poetry #43

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nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

0 posted 2008-09-11 01:30 PM

[This message has been edited by nourzihane (09-11-2008 04:07 PM).]

TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

1 posted 2008-09-11 01:43 PM

This is a nice affectionate poem and I love the cheeky little rhyme of humdrum and mum

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2008-09-12 01:26 AM

Enjoyed your poem. You are very lucky, Nourzihane to have a mother who loves you. Not everyone does.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-09-12 06:17 AM

Dear Nourzihane, I adored my Mother the way you adore yours, so I fully understand your gratitude. This is very very lovely, in text and presentation!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

4 posted 2008-09-13 05:24 AM

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-13-2008 04:13 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2008-09-13 04:13 PM

A lovely, unconditional poem, Nourzihane. Your mother must be very proud of you.

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