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In Awe
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In Awe |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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In Awe I live on the edge of the canal impressed by Monet’s water flow upon it’s naked skin colors glisten a dark jewel mysteriously lovely in stained glass constant motion moving me in dancing reflection that holds me breathlessly in awe "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhh, breathlessly poignant and lovely what a marvelous write.... Your so lucky to be able to say so much in so few words... Loved this Lee J. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
Monet was probably the impressionist par excellence. He is best known for his obsession in trying to capture the perfect impression of water lilies. Well done 1slick_lady in capturing the verbal impression of the visual impression. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Makes me want to see the painting and the waterfall. I imagine they both have a lot to say if you listen. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now, this just makes me want to run downstream nekked then through one of our own waterfalls, yes it does! Beautiful! Who knows maybe one day we can all meet at a stream with a waterfall somewhere and push Karen in!   |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
. . . and I am in awe of the beauty and peace that you, along with Monet, have painted. - Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely word painting~~ when I get the chance I love to take slow walks wherever nature lends its beauty.  M |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... lovely, and I'd just like to add that ya'll would have more trouble pulling Karen out. gotta get me one o dem waterfalls... I want to live in Awe.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well-defined imagery in an impressionist world...very nicely done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Take a bow, lady! This is gorgeous. I've no doubt it would have made Monet smile. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it glows ruby and gold like stained glass beautiful Helen |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Monet had a gift with color that is most vivid in your word art. Lovely write Helen. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That 'stained glass constant motion' really holds me. I've read it through three times just for the vision. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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