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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were reachers for love water like flowers with sponge mouths but we were weed hungry and blessed with some same entwine that made our roots more in common with the dirty side of earthly you were always pretty and poised except underneath your ribbons you were beautiful and wicked there with the mischief pendent in neon and just the way I liked your hair bedroomed with friendly winds laughter was all we left behind then on those windows full of eyes and our little white stone too on the bar by the bosoms that leaned closer to our whispers and made the yearning moan music then complained to their gods about how our hands were vulgar lacing fingers between fingers like there was nothing else in heaven worth holding onto for very long and besides where were our gloves and what would keep us from loving ____________ daark (white stone series) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
lacing fingers between fingers like there was nothing else in heaven worth holding onto for very long ~*~ I'm truly enjoying this series...   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Every single line is a treat, dear D.! You are like a sea of poetry and I love to plunge into it, just feeling the tickle of every word. Yes this series is fantastic. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
inviting and seductive.... the love of the land and freedom within |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reading you each time is like reading you for a first time the majick happens all over again DarkDaddy. I've missed reading you. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, This is very modern. It works rather well. Bobby |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
digging in the dirt, garden play or burying stones and bones of white? Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks you coolz from the pipcrewz....you all make me smile when you nod over something from my humble pen.. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
There is a lot of beauty in this poem. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you |
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