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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-09-09 09:17 PM


Out on these old
cobble-stone streets of Philly,
a guy like Bones
can get beat-up really bad.  

That’s all right.  

A guy’s gotta do
what a guy’s gotta do
to make that bread,
don’t you know?  

Well now,
if you don’t know,
that’s all right too.  

That just makes you part
of the happy—
gleeful majority.  

Do hang in there with that,
and have a nice life.

Bobby

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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
1 posted 2008-09-09 10:27 PM


....and count your blessings. There are a lot of Bones out there who would gladly trade places with  you.

Nice writing...

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-09-10 09:12 AM


Thanks Balladeer,

For your kind and truthful response to this effort.

Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-09-10 11:26 AM


Your realistic poems are tough to absorb, dear Bobby, because the truth of such inhuman childhood becomes a heavy burden upon the conscience of whoever learns about it. But it is in bringing to the light situations like these that there might be a chance to create a better society where all this misery can be ended. Hopefully.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-09-10 03:10 PM


Thanks dear Margherita,

The real, non-poetic Bones really does wish you well.  

His spirit and sense of humanity is really quite amazing.  He’s a kind and generous person.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2008-09-10 03:22 PM


I really don't think I'm part of the happy, gleeful majority (whatever that is) but I wish Bones well too.
                                Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-09-10 03:26 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

Bones says thanks for that.

Love Bobby

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