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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-09-09 08:43 PM


              Autumn Twilight 'Reflections'

Somewhere along cool-clear evening shores of a
  windy wide-world sea,
a rare and special few forever seek returning sails,
beneath the same mandolin-moonlit, ever-deepening,
time-woven tapestry of starlight, memory, and dreams…
where I may still touch your smile!

                          ---b. e. adams (9/9/08)


© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-09-10 11:33 AM


I do believe in such timeless scenery you can still touch her smile.

Wonder filled and peaceful, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2008-09-10 12:17 PM


beautifully arranged...like a blace of symphony, touching ears that can hear

incredible

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18
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3 posted 2008-09-10 02:03 PM


Lovely, especially

"beneath the same mandolin-moonlit, ever-deepening,
time-woven tapestry of starlight, memory, and dreams…
where I may still touch your smile!"


Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2008-09-10 02:08 PM


Your words are like beautiful music, Bruce.
They play in the mind again and again..
                                   Ida

TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28
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5 posted 2008-09-10 02:52 PM


There certainly were echoes of timeless music here making it a treasure of a poem.
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-09-10 07:24 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This works well.  

It's nice to see you by the sea, and out of the woods.  

You're increasing your scope.

Bobby

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