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Open Poetry #43

When Trust Has Gone

CMP
Junior Member

since 2008-07-23

Posts 22
England

0 posted 2008-09-08 11:28 AM

When Trust Has Gone

Your hurtful words, accusations thrown
Leaves me guessing, future unknown
Your untrusting nature, there is no belief
Neither upon the surface nor deep down beneath
Are these your true feelings that you share?
When anger strikes and tempers flare
The sadness felt by words alone
Hits me hard, affects bonds grown
I'm left confused and feeling lost
What's left to say, when when there is no trust?

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

1 posted 2008-09-08 12:51 PM

Trust takes an age to earn and a moment to shatter.
When trust has gone, what is lefyt?
Nicely stated poem.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2008-09-09 08:37 AM

I really like this poem. It's so true. I can relate to it so much. Words hurt more than anything and can ruin a good thing in a matter of seconds.

Good luck with everything. Awesome poem.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

3 posted 2008-09-09 06:06 PM

Hard and fast the love departs with the loss of trust.

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