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tealybaby
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since 2008-09-07
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brunswick, ga

0 posted 2008-09-07 10:06 PM



first day we met
never thought we'd get this far,
but im finding myself falling,
falling fast and falling hard.

tried not to let anyone else in
and tried to keep my love locked away
but yet somehow you stole my heart
and i find myself missing you more everyday

ive felt this emotion only once before
and i feel like my feelings are coming to fast
but now i think about it
and i realize how much i hope we last.

i find my body wanting you
and my heart seeing you as a need
so im opening up for the last time
and i pray you'll love me unconditionally.

i look back to that first we met
and how we never thought it'd go this far
but yet i still find myself falling
falling fast and falling hard.


"Simply Falling"

dedicated to: Benjamin Oneal Agnew

© Copyright 2008 Teal Vinson - All Rights Reserved
SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
1 posted 2008-09-08 01:24 AM


Welcome! I really like this. It really shows the feeling of apprehension that people get when they first start seeing someone because they aren't sure if they are going to get hurt.

I like it a lot!

Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2008-09-08 05:31 PM


Welcome to Passions, Teal.
Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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