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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2008-09-07 07:49 PM



Yummy!

A piece of homemade peanut butter fudge-
A tall glass of ice cold milk and a couch.
That’s what you call
seventh heaven.
Now what I would like to know is if this is
seventh heaven-
What is one to six?
What kind of heaven can we make out of these magnificent delights?

Number one is filled with love, hugs, kisses-
And
A box of chocolate fudge and a couch.

Number two is filled with the rays of the sun
to warm your heart,
and smiles to fill your days with happiness-
And
A piece of chocolate fudge cake, ice cream and a couch.

Number three is being with family, friends
and feeling good about yourself as a person-
And
Chocolate mint cookies, a cup of hot chocolate and a couch.

Number four is watching a brilliant sunset,
and listening to the wind on a warm summer night-
And
A dish of chocolate ice cream with whipped cream, cherries, warm
chocolate syrup
drizzling down the sides, nuts sprinkled over the top and a couch.

I believe in sharing so number five and six will be your dreams of
what they should be-
But!....................... As for me..............
A box of Fanny Farmer chocolate candy
A Death By Chocolate Cake
Chocolate Cookie Dough Ice Cream
A tall glass of ice cold chocolate milk
and lets not forget
a
Couch.

Hugs
BonBon

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Inspired-8
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Pluto
1 posted 2008-09-07 08:21 PM


Yes yes yes!!!!! I want now!!!! Love your Yummy chronology!!!!!
hugs
vic

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-09-08 05:38 AM


Oh, you Bonbon true to your name! Let's have this chocolate party, number four is perfect for me ...
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

TheAnonDavid
Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237
UK
3 posted 2008-09-08 12:57 PM


I think we should start with one, then move to two - and carry on the end - and if we are unsure, let's start again
A lovely sweet poem

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

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