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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-09-07 03:45 PM



Fall…becoming in the
Later days of
Summers
Reach -
Seasons hold no
Edge.
Leaves turn to hidden
Gold…urged only
By their nature.
And yes,
We too are greater still…and
Have our becoming.
There is no edge of our
Existence.
Only season changing to a
Further reach.



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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-09-07 03:48 PM


Intriguing view of fall. Eric. I always enjoy your magical way with words.
                             Ida

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-09-07 04:02 PM



In summer love's scent
we dip sweetest memories
to survive autumn



You always inspire!

I do love your view of seasons without edge, dear Eric, you have written here a wonderful poem to cherish throughout all our seasons.
Still, autumn carries a touch of melancholy ...


Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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3 posted 2008-09-07 09:37 PM


Thank you. I needed this! *S*

It's too easy to dread fall as the beginning of dark days... I like the perspective you give!

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-09-10 09:40 AM


"There is no edge of our
Existence.
Only season changing to a
Further reach."

Sigh!  Makes one tired at the thought of it but. yes, there is no edge!  Wonderful words as always, Eric.

Love
Helen

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