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Open Poetry #43

The Day I Came Down

CrazyHorse
Junior Member

since 2008-08-23

Posts 31
New-Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2008-09-07 12:18 PM

the day i sat down looks alot like today
wether today's good or bad i rather not say
but to buy off your load would seem like a really good way
of bringing back any hope of repeating that day

there's a restless farewell in all that i do
each letter of every word seems to melt, not go through
i've nothing to say, got nothing to prove
but i'd take a restless farewell, babe, before i'd take you

and what my feet can't walk, babe, i know will be all it can be
and what my eyes don't meet, babe, reminds me of me
and what me ears can't pronounce, babe, i'd rather not see
and what my mouth can't eat, babe, i'd rather not eat

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-09-08 02:28 AM

Nice one.

vic

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

2 posted 2008-09-08 01:57 PM

This has all the makings of song lyrics - try putting it to s tune

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

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