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Open Poetry #43

My First Kiss

mdwmr
Junior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 10

0 posted 2008-09-07 06:28 AM

I was the age of 5, just a little boy
When my little sister had over a friend, and her name was Joy;
I remember they played barbie’s for just a little while;
And I of course was Super Man with my cape of towel;
After a while of bugging them they finally let me play;
I became the astronaut, all the rest of the day;
I flew out in my space ship to save the planet of two;
No matter how many enemies, because victory I knew;
With my space ship and I, not one did I miss;
Why, because every time I returned home,
I got a heroes kiss.

Martin D. White
Author
Living The Simple Life
Simple Life Poetry www.livingthesimplelife.com
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Publisher- Poetic Monthly www.poeticmonthly.com

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-09-07 06:53 AM

Hi mdwmr this is very enjoyable to read and i like the sweet memories of the child...thank you for sharing

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-09-07 11:40 AM

Welcome to Pip, dear Martin!

This was a very lovely memory, beautifully penned.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

mdwmr
Junior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 10

3 posted 2008-09-07 04:43 PM

Thank you for the nice words. When I write this in my forum some girl replied that she has never been kissed.
So I wrote this for her:

When two lips touch for the very first time;
Both Hearts stop, and you hear a chime;
With the nerviness of the moment and the excitement of it all;
It is like not paying attention and walking into a wall;
You walk around like a zombie for the next several days;
Dumb founded by the moment in total amaze;
Now that you know what is like to have a very first kiss;
Grab the cutest person around you and
make sure you don’t miss.

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