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Open Poetry #43

No one Knows

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-09-06 05:12 PM

No one Knows

No one is around here
So don't be afraid
Come closer to me
Love is not a game
I call your name
When I dream
No one knows
how much I love you?
From bottom of my heart
Only you and me
I am here with you
And you are here with me
So no one knows
Let us be the one
Forever and ever
No one knows

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-09-06 11:19 PM

Nice dear Vandana,

That's just the way it should be.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-09-07 06:57 AM

thank you vandana for the lovely words and feelings....You are so right : no one knows....

have a nice day

yann

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

3 posted 2008-09-07 07:22 AM

There is a refreshing simplicity to this that makes it so readable - again and again.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-09-07 10:01 AM

The touch of secrecy makes it all the more enjoyable. Very lovely, dear vandana.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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