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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-09-06 03:35 PM



All too often
The heart impatiently
Strives to soften
The space left empty

Love has gone
Leaving but memories
Once again to long
What togetherness brings

A little time shall
A little time will
Time's healing allows
The empty to fill

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-07 11:18 AM


Yes, dear Victor, I agree. Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
2 posted 2008-09-09 08:51 AM


I can relate to this so much. It's true time really does heal but unfortunately it seems like it takes forever for that healing to occur.
TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28
Posts 237
UK
3 posted 2008-09-09 03:39 PM


The heart is quite remarkable - no matter how often is is broken it springs back to shape ready for more.
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