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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-09-04 03:40 AM




Looking Back In Time

Much like a favourite book
I returned back to read
Opening up the cover
As thoughts fill the need

Upon those pages I turned
Reminiscing I surveyed
All the fond reminders
Here your love was inlaid

As past chapters manifest
Thoughts continued on
Those pictures of you
Some I had paused upon

Etched forever in my mind
Words deeply ingrained
In sweet recollections
Indelibly you've remained

Love I had always retained
So much I can still view
Here it clearly reveals
I'm always thinking of you

While looking back in time
The story of you and me
All those yesteryears
Cherished in my memory


HopeĀ©2008


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TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28
Posts 237
UK
1 posted 2008-09-04 06:46 AM


What a thoughtful and wistful presentation of thoughts and memories past.
I read this several times and still wanted to read more.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2008-09-04 11:19 AM


Memories are the best photo albums to reflect upon.  Very well written and the flow was smooth as silk.
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