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Remembering ...Just Because (rp) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In The Manner Of You I know I question "yesterday", for I am a collector of meaning and surround myself in words listening for the flow of memory, that touch that keys me into you. There is always that kiss, the one that parts the truth, leaving passion up for bids. Home alone, I draw you standing before me, circling. Your sphere of influence always of interest, pulling me to your center needing your warmth, hoping for more. And when there, across from you, I watch your lips move, your eyes talk and your body communicate the unsaid. Maybe it is wishful thinking but you have it, you know... My heart, it rests with you. M (2004) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms MMs enjoy you this way. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful, incredibly romantic write, lady M. It perfumes the page with the scent of love. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And when there, across from you, I watch your lips move, your eyes talk and your body communicate the unsaid." ~ I do so know what you mean ~ and you stated it perfectly.  Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh, M, this is beautiful... love comes in so many forms and meanings. I miss the feeling of being loved so completely. I too imagine it at times, seeing it in my mind. I am trying to make memories that will carry me through the rest of this life.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Maureen, I love you this way too! This is quite enticing and beautifully written! Love and hugs. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
"And when there, across from you, I watch your lips move, your eyes talk and your body communicate the unsaid." WOW.....WOW!!! that is so well put. A beautifully written piece. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of: "I know I question 'yesterday', for I am a collector of meaning and surround myself in words listening for the flow of memory, that touch that keys me into you.... There is always that kiss, the one that parts the truth, leaving passion up for bids... you have it, you know... My heart, it rests with you." a grand-fine 're-posting'! extended applause!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
DS thanks for the visit...and I always enjoy you no matter which way  Midnitesun, I love your response and at times that is how I feel. M Linda, thank you. Sometimes I have to look back to remember what it feels like~~ Susan, "I am trying to make memories that will carry me through the rest of this life." You are so young you will have many more memories to enjoy. But your statement is exactly what I am trying to do. Margherita, it's nice when all troubles can be put aside even if for a short time. Thank you, M Gumpy,thank you for the double WOW Bruce, thank you (truth be told sometimes I don't remember writing these and have to go back to capture those feelings again) Thank you, everyone, for the kind responses. Maureen |
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