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3870 Mississippi |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Fishing With my father On the river Bobbers Among wide lily pads Muddy water Under an iron bridge A green pickup truck With no back window Loudly rumbles Down the gravel road A long haired girl With pale blue eyes Waves to me happily As it passes by And she’s all I then Can’t help think about For the rest of the day . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, I enjoyed this very much. I'm puzzled by the title. Bobby |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is a keeper in my collection, John. A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I add this one to my library....Thanks yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine 'slice of life' impression!... [lovely and effective images] serious applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your memories have such power, John. Ida |
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