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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2008-09-02 11:20 AM


Seven...one of eleven,
Seven...wont go to heaven.

Heaven lies beyond this portal,
Take the word of one Immortal,
Give your soul to me for eternity,
Release your life.

Sever...now or never,
Sever...now and forever.

Heaven lies beyond this portal,
Take the word of one Immortal,
Give your soul to me for eternity,
Release your life.

Seven...one of eleven,
Seven...will go to heaven.

Heaven lies beyond this portal,
Take the word of one Immortal,
Give your soul to me for eternity,
Release your life.
Give your soul to me,
For Eternity.

© Copyright 2008 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2008-09-02 01:50 PM


Oh this hit me like that old "bloody mary" thing...I stopped reading halfway through for fear my soul would be ripped from me...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-09-03 09:09 AM


Kyle, I know that your bark is worse than your bite! You're just a lubbable sweetie pie underneath all that macabre schtuff!

Smiling at you and giving you a little whack on the bottom! lol

Love & LIGHT,
EA

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