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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-09-01 07:20 PM



Taking time

For contemplate

Cleanse the mind

As thoughts escape

Picture these

Feelings keep

The imageries

Fathom deep

Share the tone

The muses weave

Not mine to own

Now set each free…


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-01 08:28 PM


Yo Inspired-8,

I'm afraid I don't understand this at aall.

Bobby

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-09-02 04:30 PM


Oh, this took my breath away, Victor!  Thanks for not keeping them (and thus your poem) to yourself!  I will set them/it free after (each time) I read it too.  It deserves to be inhaled by as many people as possible.  Thank you.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-09-03 09:33 AM


quote:
Taking time

For contemplate

Cleanse the mind

As thoughts escape

Picture these

Feelings keep

The imageries

Fathom deep

Share the tone

The muses weave

Not mine to own

Now set each free…



Exactly!

Love it, dear Victor, because it really shows your great awareness of being.

Love,
Margherita

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