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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2008-09-01 03:13 PM



a shifting...
a changing...
a rearranging...

lines are less defined


once...
the line
seemed clear
between wickedness
and righteousness

now...
it is when
sitting in a place
of righteousness...

that the greatest
wickedness comes.

hard and cold

above and beyond


now...
it is when in
rememberance
of wickedness
that the greatest
righteousness comes.

soft and warm

parallel and equal


a shifting...

a changing...

a rearranging...
a forgiving


an apology


an awaiting


***

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-09-02 10:37 AM


"now...
it is when
sitting in a place
of righteousness...

that the greatest
wickedness comes.

hard and cold

above and beyond"...

Larry, I know people like this...using religion and righteousness in defense

just brings up some hard feelings~~

M

ps. too worn out from my weekend to understand the title~~ but will check it out later?

TheAnonDavid
Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237
UK
2 posted 2008-09-02 11:59 AM


Taku Skan Skan (the fourth soul, nagila) is an ancient Sioux holy word meaning 'that which causes all things to move' - it is the essence of life. It is the fundamental Lakota Sioux belief of the connectedness of all things.
Even evil and righteousness are related.
Or maybe I have missed the point of the poem completely.

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