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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-01 03:13 PM



movies are the saliva we leave behind
when our minds go there
where we don't talk about out loud
because some stranger will hear us
and realize there is more to us
than just them and their baggage

I see your eyes every morning dawn
as the sun seems to go down
and something else takes it place
in my day dream place
next to some other smile
that you gave me with a kiss that time

you know I wonder about your sounds
if you still pretend you are afraid
and swallow hard before whispering
that you really love the silk there
around your wrists like scarves
but wish they were tighter fitting

so you couldn't give excuses to leave


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daark..(white stone series)

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with you
1 posted 2008-09-01 04:49 PM


"so you couldn't give excuses to leave"

.....pretty much

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

2 posted 2008-09-01 06:28 PM


formal logic fails
when trying to understand
the wants of the heart.

Indigo

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-09-01 08:42 PM


Yo Dark Stranger,

For some reason, this is opaque to me.

Bobby

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
4 posted 2008-09-01 09:25 PM


wonderfully enigmatic
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2008-09-01 09:27 PM


most fitting words
of a dark stranger
in a lighter shade
of pale

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2008-09-02 05:42 AM


ms suesea, thank you dear lady


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ms indi, thank you for swimming upstream here


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bobby J..I do know a lady named Opaque, thank you


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martin' thanks guy for the read


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ms inky, thanks babe for your smile eyes

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
7 posted 2008-09-02 07:33 AM


quote:
I see your eyes every morning dawn
as the sun seems to go down
and something else takes it place
in my day dream place
next to some other smile
that you gave me with a kiss that time




Oh, the heart shows so lovingly here ...

I very much love this series, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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