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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-08-31 08:57 PM

Into the grey
we digress

shed
of the neon
of color
and the peripheral
black
to confine us

we drift

like corks
on wild waters

struggling
for destiny
and heart's validation
of that kiss left to die
on the breeze
of last summer

and i wish
i could daydream
and smile
with your eyes
in my mirror
of memoirs

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-01-2008 08:59 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-08-31 10:25 PM

Nice writing...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-09-01 02:00 AM

Soft melancholic poetic breeze.

So beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-09-01 05:45 AM

ms inky...

you do bottles so well
makes me thirst for more

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2008-09-01 12:14 PM

Excellent... You did well..very well!

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

5 posted 2008-09-01 06:20 PM

struggling
for destiny
and heart's validation
of that kiss left to die
on the breeze
of last summer

Don't we all have such a bittersweet memory like this... you cut like a knife, IG.

Indigo

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

6 posted 2008-09-02 11:35 AM

awesome, as always

violence may not be the answer, but it does make good headway

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2008-09-02 01:48 PM

"..heart's validation"

that.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2008-09-02 09:17 PM

"struggling
for destiny
and heart's validation
of that kiss left to die
on the breeze
of last summer"

So well said. Yes, I've been there, done that! Enjoyed!

Helen

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2008-09-02 09:28 PM

..."like corks
on wild waters"...

Brilliant! ;0

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2008-09-03 09:59 AM

"we drift

like corks
on wild waters

struggling
for destiny"

~ It is lines like these that keep me wanting to read more and more of your uniquely gorgeous poetry!!!

Linda

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2008-09-03 04:13 PM

thanks everyone
for stopping by
always appreciated

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2008-09-07 04:46 PM

Enjoyed, Inkgoddess.
Ida

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2008-09-07 09:43 PM

I know that wish... as painful as wistful. *S*

Great write!

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