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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-08-30 07:08 PM


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Ah Helen,
You make men mad
In their old age

Look how they’re moved
For ships beyond
The quiet sea

To free again
The Queen of Troy


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-08-30 07:28 PM


makes me wish
to be
from troy

still
you made me smile

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-31 08:30 AM


Sweet stirrings are a gift in old age and give the blood a youthful rhythm!

Very nice work.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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