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Open Poetry #43

I am Remembering

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-08-30 11:41 AM

I Am Remembering You

I am here tonight
The day of remembering you
I am looking at your pictures
And reminding of the times
The time of being together
And there was love
Now
Its seems
Love wasn't here
Sitting here all alone
Memories of you and me
I am remembering you a lot
Today
I don't know what else to do
Without your sweet memories
Without your sweet loving days
And your loving ways
I am here
To remember you
With your memories came
on my mind
I am remembering you

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2008-08-30 12:32 PM

enjoyed your touch here ms

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

2 posted 2008-08-30 12:38 PM

There is an elegance and fragility to this poem

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-09-02 06:35 PM

Nice, I have one I remember...fortunately she still comes around on special occasions...soon permanantly...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-09-03 09:55 AM

vandana, you always write of love with an exceptionally delicate and graceful pen.

May love be with you always, sweet poetess.

Linda

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-09-03 11:35 AM

so lovely words.

have a nice day

yann

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

6 posted 2008-09-03 07:44 PM

you write beautifully. I enjoyed this very much.

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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