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To share ones love
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To share ones love |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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To have a love for life; what joy To see what’s bright when day is grey To use ones time with life to toy Is just how I enjoy each day To see the good, forgive a wrong To share a smile so it may grow To be where I might just belong Lets good and peace together sow To know each day you do what’s right Fulfill ones duty and ones deed To hold each day as happy sight Does fertilize and grow that seed To know the truth, but share a thought To listen and to be a friend Does offer more than what is bought And that is what to you I send |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very much enjoyed this read and you said it exactly the way it is intended to be. I especially liked the second and last verses. Well done. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very uplifting poem, Rick. Ida |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thank you Mark for your reply my friend, it was very much appreciated and enjoyed. Dear Ida, great to see you here again my friend, thank you for the visit and your comment. Thank you very much to you both, always such a pleasure to share here. Sincerely Rick |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Rick my good friend that is written with the feel of the master's hand. Take a bow. Great poem. Lindsay |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thank you James, much appreciated. Dear Lindsay, thanks for the reply my good friend, they are always very much enjoyed. To you both, may you both be well and have happiness on your side always. Rick |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick I think this is a poem that I needed to read right now. Thank you for writing it and sharing it. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Rick, this is how we are meant to be ... you say it very beautifully. Thank you! Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
A nice steady, even flow to this, capturing worthwhile sentiments. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Alison, glad you read it when needed my friend, thank you for sharing your time and words, appreciated. Dear Margherita, it is how it is meant to be my friend, but sadly many will not share what is theirs to give. Thank you for your reply. TheAnonDavid, thank you for taking the time to visit and comment my friend, very much appreciated. To you all my friends, again thank you very much for the interaction of words, nice to have you all around to share. Sincerely Rick |
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