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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-08-29 01:51 PM

Quenching My Thirst

Droplets of inspiration
You knew of my need
As I loved the taste
Of the words you feed

Passionate the feeling
With sensuous flavour
Quenching my thirst
Words of love I savour

As I absorb your words
Within I feel the delight
Its like sweet nectar
Pleasuring my appetite

Words I liken to a kiss
My hungry lips caress
Inspired by your love
Dripping in tenderness

Hope©2008

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2008-08-29 02:34 PM

Soft flowing words from you today. I really enjoyed this work and the way it just slow read itself throughout the entire piece made it even more enjoyable. I love the words also ... but more so the feelings that come from those words and experiences.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2008-08-29 07:10 PM

HopeS
Very much enjoyed these words today, had the feeling of peace and love intertwined.

Rick

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-08-31 10:12 PM

Yes they are soft flowing words my dear

Written in your inimitable style. much enjoyed.

Lindsay

TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

4 posted 2008-09-01 08:25 AM

There is a melancholy flavour to this that I like.
I can sense the feeling that went into the words.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-09-02 08:13 AM

Dear Hope, in the absence of the beloved, words are no doubt a wonderful means to bring him close.

You have written a very very beautiful poem here!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

6 posted 2008-09-02 08:21 AM

quite sensual and erotic, me likey!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-09-02 10:26 AM

Hope, this brought to mind what my Mom used to say to my Dad, "Kiss me, I'm thirsty!"

They would have loved your poem!

You certainly write romantic ~ and highly sensuous! ~ poetry!

A joy to read, as always!

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

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